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post Oct 22 2012, 9:14 am
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Lyrics to "I'm the Proof"
Taken from a live performance 2012-10-20 (Green Bay, WI)
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Did it hit you like a speeding car?
Did it change the way you were before?
Did it leave you wanting so much more?
Did the world they were selling, ever really follow through?
Did it taste the way you thought it would?
Are you still hungy?

If you were, well I was too
Where you've gone, I've been there
I've chased that fire and got burned, just like you
Sometimes people change and I'm the proof

You say you don't believe in love
It never found nothing true
That life has only left you broken-hearted busted open
Won't you take a walk with me?
Down to the river where angels and sinners be
Take a drink, I know you're thirsty

If you are, well I was too
Where you've gone, I've been there
I've chased that fire and got burned, just like you
Now sometimes people change
I'm the proof, yeah
I'm the proof

Lay it down
All your pain
All your fear
All your sorrow
Lay it down
All your tears
All your worry for tomorrow
Lay it down
Come on out
Let the sun shine on your face
Lay it down
Lay it down
I know you're ready

If you are, well I was too
Where you've gone, I've been there
I chased that fire but found the truth
Sometimes people change
Sometimes people change
Sometimes people change
And I'm the proof

Did it hit you like a speeding car?
Did it change the way you were before?


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post Oct 26 2012, 12:22 am
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QUOTE(dangum @ Oct 22 2012, 9:14 am) *

Did it hit you like a speeding car?
Did it change the way you were before?
Did it leave you wanting so much more?
Did the world they were selling, ever really follow through?
Did it taste the way you thought it would?
Are you still hungy?

If you were, well I was too
Where you've gone, I've been there
I've chased that fire and got burned, just like you
Sometimes people change and I'm the proof



I read this and it saddens me. The use of speeding cars and chasing fires as vehicles of metaphors to tell us "sometimes people change"... Yes, things do change, it saddens me because Ed's lyric writing have changed. For me they have really deteriorated.. I read the above lyrics then compare them to something more meaningful and thought-provoking, deep and insightful off of Mental Jewelry like say:

So I said unto this man
"Who are you and where do you come from?"
And he proceeded to tell me many things
But I said nothing at all

For the flower in the corner, by the room,
In the window, and the sun
Said it all


These days he writes as if sitting across from you at a coffee table, or a wine bar, having a casual conversation. Or reading a children's book:

Can we rise?
Can we fly?
Just to fall out of the sky
Like a shooting star burning in the night
Oh, how high we climb
Do we fall?

"Oh, how high we climb?" Falling out of the sky like a shooting star? This is what it's come down to for me. A man whose earlier works and lyric writing ability drew me to the band, deep lyrics, thought provoking.... and now we get the above. It's grade school material at best, I've read better haiku. "Do we fall?" Yes, if you're speaking lyrics, then it has fallen off quite a bit from the deep lyrics of MJ days. Falling like a shooting star.. burning in the night... if you want to use metaphors to drive across points.

-Jimmy


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