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post Sep 7 2011, 7:24 am
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Please feel free to compare lyrical mishaps from these two albums. Post the worst and post the best. /By the end, hopefully we can mostly agree as to which was most poorly written.

My vote goes to V....although I'm open to being proven wrong.

Let the shitslinging begin!

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post Sep 7 2011, 8:34 am
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Lazy songwriting in Ed's case, is not good .. when he's good he's amazing, when he's bad he's deplorable.

I think the open interpretation is a big part of it, not everything, but a part of it. The fact you can listen to SS for example and get a lot of different theories on exactly what a song is about and no one really be right or wrong, can be pretty special. Its not that they're nonsensical lyrics, just very open to interpretation. Where as SFBM it's all very "this is what this song is, nothing else". It's quite dull.

It's not a grammatical failing to say that the overuse of similes is a major failure. There is nothing grammatically incorrect about it or anything. Song writing is one time when grammar and the general laws of English can be thrown out the window - poetic licence. Sometimes it can actually enhance songs to take a little liberties with grammar and such. Sometimes you can even draw really beautiful similes. But when overused and really unimaginative its very dull. It sort of does go hand in hand with the open interpretation thing ... that style of writing isn't promoting creativity or indeed as you say, asking the pertinent questions. It's specifically saying "hey look at this, its like this". Its very limiting.

V's lyrics are all over the place and completely different to anything Ed had written before. It was like he just got coked up and thought he'd give something new a go (strong possibility thats what happened maybe!). So it's hard to get too worked up or angry at them because they're just ... throw away. Where as with SFBM you get the feel he sat down and went "ok, lets give this my best shot to write something good". And it churned out what it did.
I'm certainly not saying one is better than the other, just that one is worse than the other tongue.gif


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LiveRoCkS77   V vs SFBM 2:   Sep 7 2011, 7:24 am
Pokey   I still say no matter what that I'd listen to ...   Sep 7 2011, 7:47 am
LiveRoCkS77   I still say no matter what that I'd listen to...   Sep 7 2011, 7:57 am
Hoodstock   I still say no matter what that I'd listen to...   Sep 7 2011, 2:59 pm
Pokey   That's great and all but he said SFBM 2 in th...   Sep 7 2011, 3:19 pm
LiveRoCkS77   That's great and all but he said SFBM 2 in th...   Sep 7 2011, 3:20 pm
OutToDry   in a dream i had you were standin all alone with ...   Sep 7 2011, 8:14 am
World Dreamer   What I noticed in SFBM is that probably 85% of the...   Sep 7 2011, 8:17 am
LiveRoCkS77   Lazy songwriting in Ed's case, is not good .....   Sep 7 2011, 10:43 am
tiger   I think they're equally as bad, with V perhaps...   Sep 7 2011, 11:12 am
LiveRoCkS77   I think they're equally as bad, with V perhap...   Sep 7 2011, 11:21 am
Merica   do what we came to do in a town tonight where the...   Sep 7 2011, 4:11 pm
Sonic Tonic   I agree with what you're saying somewhat, but...   Sep 7 2011, 4:59 pm
OutToDry   Transmit your Love should be voted the worst ever ...   Sep 7 2011, 11:42 am
rock4adiference   Transmit your Love should be voted the worst ever...   Sep 7 2011, 12:02 pm
OutToDry   nothing to see there rock4, move along, it's u...   Sep 7 2011, 12:05 pm
thefunkyredcaboose   I like the music of TYL.   Sep 7 2011, 12:06 pm
World Dreamer   I have said it often. V, for me, gets a pass becau...   Sep 7 2011, 12:20 pm
LiveRoCkS77   I have said it often. V, for me, gets a pass beca...   Sep 7 2011, 2:41 pm
World Dreamer   Somewhat, SFBM was a completely serious effort by...   Sep 7 2011, 6:19 pm
+Ed+   I think we must hop to discussing the BEST Live wo...   Sep 7 2011, 12:58 pm


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